Over this last year we have whiten a total of 9 opinion pieces. I have looked over all my past O/P's and all the comments my teacher has left me and I can see that I have improved on my translation from one paragraph to the other. I have also improved on my spelling and my point of view towards the topic. In the earlier O/P I often went off topic and babbled on about something that had no relation to the O/P topic, but as the year went on I focused more and more on what the topic was about and soon my O/P's were rate on topic.
As I was looking over my O/P's I realized that I really need to work on my spelling and not rushing through my O/P and making tons of mistakes with not only spelling but also with my punctuation, so i would really like to improve on that.
I would firstly like to point out that I love your picture on this blog. Secondly, I think that we all need help with our spelling a little bit.
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